In Class Essay

          I think about this girl problem a lot if she can make anything get in fire like in X-men movie did, then there must be some other people out there can do some thing the same. In my heart I always sure that there are a thousand of natural things that science can't find out yet maybe human can fly by them self without any electronic machine to help, maybe they just need to be happy like in Peter Pan movie show us when we just a kid, who knows what gonna happen. People use to said those are lies and making attention but I don't believe in that not everyone can lie all the time. And for example in this girl situation ( the girl can make fire) she just a little she can't lie that much and let scientist to do a lot of things on her body every day. 

         This topic make me think further about ghost, a very natural happen in our nature but none of the science can prove that yet. But some people said they already met ghost, they come back to revenge will those words are all lies I mean there are a thousand, more than a thousand people said they meet a ghost then is it all of them are lies. By my eyes with my own eyes and I'm not a liar I saw a ghost in a house when I got to vacation with family, at night I sleep with my cousin, uncle, and house worker.  Suddenly iwaki up at night and I saw a die person walk close to me and and die next to where I sleep, I was too  scare so just close my eyes. When I wake up the second time I look out the window there is a red fabric flying out side make me think of the ghost so I just close my eyes again and hoping is the morning already when I open my eyes again. Wake up I the morning I check out the window and there are no more red fabric fly out side, I come and talk to my house worker about what happen at night and she said she saw the same thing as me. So it was not a dream it real. I tell to my friend about the story some of them are scare and believe me but some of them just think I'm making up story to make my self cooler. 

         Another thing i always concern about is ALIEN are they real ? For serious I have no idea about this information  on Internet they post a picture of alien lay on the snow but then the next post they said it just a fake alien make from chicken skin by a mask maker which post I should believe the first one or the second one? It could be the government don't want city zen to know there are alien exit maybe they think the citizen are not ready for these kind of news?

I think your response is pretty good, but it would work better if you took all of these examples: aliens, the firestarter girl, the ghost you saw, etc. as examples of the bigger issue—is science able to effectively explain our world or are there things that science is unable to explain? I do think the ideas in this response are good, but this could use a little more focus and better organization.